Margaux Wren
Website & Landing-Page Copy

Writing for developers without writing down to them.

Fieldnote · Developer tool2025
SaaSDeveloperWebsite copy
Fieldnote — Developer tool
The brief

A dev tool with brilliant engineering and a marketing site that either over-explained or hid behind jargon. They needed copy that respected developers and still converted the engineering manager who signs the PO.

The challenge

Two audiences, one page: the developer who’ll evaluate it and the manager who’ll pay for it. The copy had to be technically honest and commercially sharp at the same time.

The approach

A homepage with a developer-true hero and a manager-true value section beneath it — no marketing fluff up top, no hand-waving on ROI below.

The words

What we actually wrote.

A few lines from the project — the flat version struck out, the sharper version in its place.

Hero headline
Empowering developers to build better software, faster.
The CLI you’ll stop cursing at.
Subhead
Fieldnote catches the bug before it ships, in the editor you already live in. No new tab, no new ritual.
Pricing intro
Flexible plans to fit teams of all sizes.
Free for solo work. Per-seat when your team’s reputation is on the line.
Manager value line
One prevented incident pays for the year. We did the math so your finance team doesn’t have to.
“She got developers to trust the page and got my CFO to approve it. I didn’t think one page could do both.”Sam W. — Founder, Fieldnote (dev tools)

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